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Monday, December 19, 2011

Blog-ger#7: Peak

  Peak is nuts, but awesome! Scaling a building is something I would think of as audacious and if completed, legendary. I think that the idea of using the blue mountain tag to bolster his morals to help him climb is very cool. The blue mountain tag is a stencil of a mountain that Peak created that he spray paints in blue onto the skyscrapers he scales. The idea of scaling buildings is interesting to me because it shows the way that Peak is subconsciously thinking about how he misses his dad and that by doing so, relieves himself of the burden of love he owes his dad.
  Peak is one of the most dynamic characters I have seen since Repossessed. Peak is in many ways like Kiriel, the main character in Repossessed. They were both given chances to let go of their "dreams" and have the punishment be less demoralizing, let alone severe. Peak is one of the characters you want to back up and follow only because they are ambitious and actually trying to make a difference.
   I think the story is going to unfold unusually but interestingly. I think the relationship between Josh, Peak's dad, and Peak is going to start very awkwardly. Though they will take a while to bond, they'll probably end up correlating perfectly. I think that Peak appreciates his dad looking out for him, but isn't sure if he's ready to move in with him.

Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Blog-ger #6: Cherub: The Dealer

                   This is really awesome. I read the first book during the summer break and it was awesome. But this one has started out just as I expected. In the middle of some expedition, but James and Bruce somehow mess up. I didn't think they were on a training mission but a real mission. That took me a little bit by surprise.
                   This was surprising. The book feels like Robert Muchamore changed the style and craft of his writing, which drastically changes his writing. When the story starts they are running through the woods and that was cool, and the way that Muchamore always starts his book with a sort of drop off as if the time in between books was experienced but not by the reader.
                   Overall, this book, i know, will be awesome, and it will make me read the third. The time of reading this book will be interesting and experiencing the book and learning about James adventures will be fun.

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Blog Reflection OMGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

            I think that my blog obviously needs help. Relatively, I'm not doing what I should. My first blog post should be my worst, but it's my best! I think that's a problem because I should be improving, not degrading. My grammar is on top of it, and my ability to incorporate my prodigiously awesome ideas into my writing is always with me.
            Right now, I need to think about upgrading my blog because consistently I have been decreasing in quality as I write my posts. The value, length, and pzaz of the writing is dying with all of my blog posts. Maybe I need to make more of a commitment when I write...
             Grammar, it's not a problem. I know that I never make mistakes on most of my spelling and my grammar and punctuation is perfect.
           

Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Blog-ger #3: The Reformed Vampire Support Group

             What is going to happen next? Is the wolf humanoid going to be sent into the old cargo room, to where Nina, Dave, and Father Ramon are staying? If so, has it happened before? These questions are burning to be answered and I want to know. I mean, why hasn't there been any recognition that the beast was there before?
              What if the humanoid kills them? What if it is sent into that room and is ordered to kill them? I personally, think that the beast will be sent into the room, but the group members will have to put up one hell of a fight to kill the thing. And what if Dave dies? Or Father Ramon? How will Nina go anywhere without their help? She can't even drive and is terrible at navigating! She would surely perish at the hand of nature...Unless...
               Can they possibly escape? What are the chances of their survival? They are going to have to deal with a seriously big wolf thing to actually find out if Barry McKinnon killed Casimir. And the way the story is going and the doubt of the author's voice, it sounds to me that at least one of them will die somehow. And if they survive, how will they escape? They could make up a story that could persuade Mr. McKinnon, but I think that's not going to happen...

Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Blog-ger #2: The Reformed Vampire Support Group

               This is one hell of a journey! How is Nina going to get out of this? She is totally going a long way! Basically, Nina is going all the way to Cobar, wherever that is, to see if  Barry McKinnon is the killer of Casimir! And Barry might not even be the killer but they want to go all the way out their for that.
                I don't think Barry is the killer. I think the story would be even cooler if he wasn't the killer and the story ended with the support group not finding the killer. That would be awesome! That would prove that the group will be there for their peers and that they wouldn't stop until they find the killer and stop him. But maybe they would all be dead before that happens...
                I think Sanford will be the next victim. If he is, that would cool. I mean, I don't want him to die, but I think that the group might do better without him. He's always being pestemistic and affects the group negatively most of the time. He thinks that everything should be his way because he created the group...

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Blog-ger #2: The Reformed Vampire Support Group

                 This is EPIC! What happened to Casimir? My book is about a group of vampires and what they really are. Vampires are pathetic, weak, sick losers. But Nina, 51 year old, 16 year old, who believes in the power of friendship to muster up the killer of the first vampire, Casimir!
                  Nina is the most ill person, ever! She thinks that by writing stories about superhero vampires, that she will one day feel better...She is a somewhat dynamic character with the taste of belief in her. She is always paranoid, yet optimistic. I think this really comes into play after the fact the Casimir was killed, and their is a killer who knows how to kill the Support Group. The Support Group is the group in which Nina and her fanged friends talk about what their lives have been like in the week between each session. This plays a big part of the story and how Nina really rejuvenates her life through the group.
                   "We really need to go! Like now!" Nina says this after Casimir has been discovered dead in his bed, or coffin. This is a quote that can helpfully describe to you, that Nina, is in fact, a paranoid immortal. She is always stressing how she is writing her book and that means that it means a lot to her..

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Blog-ger #1: Repossessed!

              Kiriel is a dynamic character. Even his name resembles so much. "People call me a demon. I like 'Kiriel'. It means 'fallen angel' rather than DEMON." Kiriel is the devil, unfortunately. He is the tormentor of guilt-full souls. He has always wanted to "take a vacation" in the world below, just because his job is so boring. He takes time to gather candidates to steal bodies from. Eventually, he finds one that is to seal his fate in a terrible car crash. He takes advantage of his situation, and this is where the journey begins...
              He knows it's against the rules. Yet, he dusts it off his shoulder like it doesn't matter. Kiriel realizes he is slowing caring less and less. He is also doing this for the best. Shaun, the body owner, would have died anyway. I think Kiriel is doing the just and righteous deed. He is sacrificing his immortality in Hell, to try and change the world and community of Shaun... Or what used to be Shaun.
              Kiriel is also doing the wrong thing. I know it makes no sense to have conflicting answers to life. Or would it be better to say that this fallen angel isn't staying within the boundaries of the Universe? Everyone in this world possibly has a job. Most people think their jobs are probably monochromatic. But, they carry out their responsibilities to the best of their power. Can't Mr. Demonic Fallen Angel do the tantamount?